rate_review Reviews

So glad you are back!! Been waiting so long for more of this story, it is great, please write more soon =)

I hope you keep updating. I\'ll be waiting

YAY!! another chapter! I can\'t wait to read the next one, so please update soon! XD

THE CHAPTERS ARE TOO SHORT!!! :\'( update fast plzz

noo i dont want charlotte to get away..i want her to start falling for him even after the horrible things hes done
to her...he sounds fukin sexxyyy btw lol :P plz update soon..dont leave us hanging.

I\'m begging you please pleeeeeeeeease update please

It\'s great to see you back! Your story is one of the few that is well written, thought out and actually has development. I\'m not into violence towards women (partly because I\'m one too), however one does feel sympathy towards Matt, whom also is a victim of violence. On a erotic note though, it\'s great to have someone go to extremes just to win your love.
In chapter 27 (\'what have you got to lose\'), Matt pondered with the idea of starting a family with Charlotte. Will she get pregnant? It\'s not like they have been using protection.
They only negative thing I can think of is the sex scene are not detailed enough (not that it has to be that way, but it\'s nice), and before you updated, the situation between Matt and Charlotte was getting a bit repetitive, with no development to the relationship.
I look forward to reading your next chapter, so don\'t stop!
Kind regards
Amanda

I was in the most elated of minds to see Charlotte fight yet PLEASE I request you not to let Matt gain her affections. He is pure SCUM!!!! YES, I HAD FELT SYMPATHY FOR HIM!!!! HE HAD HAD A ROUGH PATH TO WALK YET HE EXCUSES HIS ACTIONS IN HIS HORRIBLE PROCEEDURES AGAINST CHARLOTTE!!!! HOW HORRENDOUS!!!! BUT DEFINITELY THIS STORY IS AS RICH AS THE CHERRIES RIPE IN THE GLISTENING AFTER A RAINFALL!!!! YOUR MIND WORKS THE CHARM TO PUT ALL THE IDEAS OF IMAGINATIVE SUCCESSION INTO THIS PIECE!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS EVER AND DON\'T LEAVE OFF AGAIN AS YOUR STORY IS EXCELLENT!!!!

Hey!! This is suuuuuuuuuuuch a good story. The plot is amazing and I love how you mix the moments with Matt and Charlotte with the investigation. I\'ve been reading this story for a long time and for a while I didn\'t think you\'d continue writing it!! But these updates have been great and I promise to keep reading if you keep writing!!

Sonya

OK, I\'m officially BEGGING here-UPDATE!