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for Only You Sweetheart

by shadesOFgrey

person J
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow i've never read a story, that had soooo many mistakes, and yet it kept me so attatached. I have to admit, if you worked on every chapter a little, and looked for grammer mistakes and just spelling mistakes period, this story would be alot better. However the story itself has me addicted, so please, please, please update. Thanks!
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE MORE A.S.A.P.!!!!
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I sure hope the next chapter or at least the end of the story ends up w/this asshole dead. Do you know someone with anti-social personality disorder, because it\'s an exact descrption of someone with APD. Can\'t be changed, no drugs can change them and it doesn\'t excuse their actions.
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update this story is awesom!
person MysticalElf
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
person MysticalElf
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if you don\'t right more......... ..... (\'>.>)
person yoshine
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I wrote to you 3 times. Come on when are you going to write another chapter for Only You Sweetheart. Its been ages.
person shaz
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update!
person Shaz
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update! today is the first time i have read fanfiction and i love your story! alot of the stuff i\'ve come across on this site has been off putting (well for my tastes anyway!) but I really enjoyed your story. The characters are really well written and you actually care for them rather than it just being a smutty story. As unstable as Matthew is I cant help but feel sorry for him and I really like Charlotte cus shes strong but cant help but start liking him. Please write some more, this story was so refreshing compared to the other fanfics on this site!
person MysticalElf
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!