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for Only You Sweetheart

by shadesOFgrey

person Kali
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG sweety this story is amazing. The things this girl is going though are horrible HOWEVER this story is amazing. You bring such great detail into it that it makes me sort of feel like I am her and it just blows my mind great story I want to see more good work hehe
person Bondage_Fairy
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wicked as always :)
person Limegreenlion
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, this rocks. I loved the little insight into Matts life. GREAT FIC!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
person inusextoy
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
COOL!! I really like this chapter adn I hope you update soon!^.^
person androbabe
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shit that\'s good. Very few grammatical errors too in such a long piece, great story. Please update - I want to see her escape! (And even him rape her which is freaking me out). That story made me go cold, the images you brought up were so clear...even down to the messy ca in in the bedroom. I had to read it in two goes....wow.
person littleswan
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cool story. I wonder how it\'s going to end? Are her feelings for matt gonna change or stay the same? Keep writing!
person Bondage_Fairy
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wicked :D Awww I feel really sorry for Charlotte, he really shouldnt treat her the way he does, because it just makes her hate him even more.
person inusextoy
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chappy!! hope you update soon! ^.^
person inusextoy
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww.... no fair you need to update really soon okies?
person Limegreenlion
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AH! NO! Not the misery thing! [shudder] that was the worst thing in the movie! When she breaks his shins, right? Can\'t he just carve something into her skin? I\'m better with blood than with bones breaking. Then again, you\'re the author and you know best! [sucks up so will update faster] I love this fic so much, you are an amazing author. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!