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for Only You Sweetheart

by shadesOFgrey

person night
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM


You did say he would get more sinister as the story went along...i think this is the starting point. Damn! He is crazy and what makes it scary is that he at times is
very loving and at other times hateful.
So now he wants her to marry him? Now that could be a very effective tool or it could make no difference to her. I wonder how she is going to react.
Update soon!
person OUS
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
charlotte had fainted and what she thought was real was actually just a dream. :)
Thanks for the reviews.
person Night
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM


Oh that was cruel...you gave me a little hope of her escaping, but it was all a dream! I should be cursing at you in all of the languages i know, which is four, and
flaming you on how you could write such a story; beating a women and then saying you love her. How crazy is that?
But what i should do is what i am not doing... as hard as it is to admit. These types of fics totally bring the dark side of you out. I think i need to go
pray or do somthing good...
Update soon!
person Inusextoy
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter.. my heart aches for matt... I wanna know why Charlotte is being a little bitch and won\'t just except that he loves her and that he doesn\'t want her to leave him.. I mean I\'d be alll over a guy if they did that to me! ^.^
person Kali
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter hun but im slightly confused...i dont get the part where they are found out then the doctors let them go back to matts place...confusing very confusing
person Bondage_Fairy
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wicked :D plesew post more!
person 1_wing3d_ang3l
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dis fic was kewl I suppose, but it scared me a lil....... yup! it betta than anything i could eva rite though!
person Hm...
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very intense story... But you know, I\'d probably think she\'d be in a coma or something with what she has to go through. I wonder what would Matt think if she went unconscious for more than a day? It\'d be interesting to know.
person kikey
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The movie is Fear. I been reading this fic for a long time and I really enjoy reading it and am always happy when you update. I alwyas wonder what is gonna happen next and what Matt is going to do. It also adds a twist becaue they do have a thing in common. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person Bondage_Fairy
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ppppplllllleeeeeeaaaaassesssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeee right more soon!