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This is still birll, i am really loving it. Keep up the good work, and i hope one i too can write up to thisx standard, as igreatly admire your work!

god i sound weird tlkin like that


yeah it rocks hun!

luv finchy xx

I think it would be good to carry on the thing with Matt and Charlotte, but that could get a bit boring. Maybe you should create more characters :) Either way Im sure it will be brilliant :)

This fic ROCKS!!! I love it. please update soon!!!

Wow, Matt can tell that Charlotte was lying about warming up to the marriage thing, but he can\'t understand her explanation about him loving her the ideal, not her as a person (a scene you write beautifully, btw.) The guy\'s perceptive, I\'ll give him that, but damn, if he\'s not delusional as shit. Do see where all his violence is coming from, what with his frustration because he can\'t get through to Charlotte. Because I want to beat the living crap out of him and then some to get through to him about what an abusive, damaging fuck he is and that he has no idea what love is. If he was taking her just to slake his lust and control her and torture her, I\'d understand and enjoy it since I\'m an equally sick fuck myself who enjoys female degradation as much as the next person, but this whole \"I love you so I beat you\" thing makes me want to pull at his balls. I apparently have little patience for skewed logic it seems. Anyone who hits me \"out of love\" is getting a frying pan to the face. But love the story, and the psychology in it is so well done. Both character are fleshed out, the plot well placed and tense, and the writing is wonderful, especially the line about Charlotte\'s thinking answer to Matt\'s question about why doesn\'t she love him and she\'s thinking between the beatings and the kidnapping and something else. Priceless.

I have been reading this for about and month and have finally decided it takes a truly sick and ingeneious mind to come up with something like this. I think you\'re bloody brilliant. This kind of fiction definitly caters to my fantasies. I\'m half hoping that she falls in ;love with Matt and half hoping she kicks his ass and makes him her slave. But i can\'t wait until your next chapter. keep up the good work.

Matt...that tricky bastard! errr, i hate him. great story. next chapter plz. ^^

I really want Charlotte to fall in love with Matthew...I think that would be so cool. Maybe I\'m just sick in the head *most likely* but that\'s how I want the story to turn out..then have cool con smut instead of entirely non-con stuff. ^_^ Update soon!

I believe there is a whole socio-psychological thesis needed be written on this story and its appeal. And I mean that complimentary. There is something very paradoxical about this story, which I can\'t put into words - hence the thesis. You describe something no one would like to experience, yet that isn\'t wholly true, because if people didn\'t identify with your story, they wouldn\'t react so positively to it. I react positively to it although if I was in Charlotte\'s place, I\'d have slit my wrists ten chapters ago. Matt is the villain of the piece, but his motives are not very villainy and his psychosis even makes him something of a sympathetic character. That\'s a balance act and one you can be proud of.

All in all, this is a story I never want to end, because any resolution to it will change the tone of the story. And this balance act between the slightly romantic non-con and the horror on the other side is what makes me love this fic. Maybe you\'ll find an ending that allow thory ory keep this balance. That would great.

K

<3 it :D

get married? holy crap! that sucks. matt is waaaaay messed up in the head if he actually thinks that she\'s going to agree to it.