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Dipped with more delicious treats that the temptation doesn\'t allow me to resist. You words have every giving length of character within creating a very thoroughly magnificent atmosphere. But I now have a desire of killing Matt, though his personality has originated due to his complicated childhood I don\'t believe anymore he can change and bring Charlotte happiness. I don\'t want Charlotte to end up with this guy anymore and I want her to be RESCUED from that monster. Your Story is still brilliant and I love the emotions gyrating Cha Charlotte is still clinging on to strength and hope even the whole situation is bringing her closer to losing all that . I know you will delight us more with your excellent imagination. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

Yay your back :)

hurry and update, I want to find out what happens.
Great story. Matt is a sick guy.
The movie is called \"FEAR\" hee hee hee.
so update soon.
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cyndi

YES YES YES!!!!




YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!

W00T!!!

Oooh.. I love you. I\'ve been waiting ages for this story to be updated, and you\'ve finally done it! Thank you. I absolutely adore this story. Is there a hidden anti-hero concept in this one perhaps? Because, I do not hate Matt like I feel I should. I can see where he\'s coming from I suppose, but that doesn\'t mean I condone his actions against Charlotte. And still, as crazy as he is, he seems like one of the hottest guys ever. Kind of like my boyfriend.. Except, he doesn\'t beat me up. Cause I\'d kick his ass. xD But no, seriously, this is a great story. You rarely see stories like this anymore, damn people too afraid to take it the the edge. And as we all know, when you hit over the edge, it\'s always the best part.

Thanks so much for having this story on here, you have true talent.

Anon, ^_^

come on u said monday and tuesday like 2/3 weeks ago!

I must say this fic is as delicious as chocolate. I LOVE every moment of it! Its true that Matt is beginning to cross some lines here. I agree with almost anyone when they want Charlotte and him to be together cause thats the way I want it to be in the end but I would think its good for Matt to well come to realize that HE also hurts Charlotte with his abusive actions. I think that Matt can become a better guy I mean c\'mon with all those bastards treatin\' him like fuck its bound for him to become this way. Well Dazzle me more silver star cause thats how BRILLIANT your work is! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
P.S. Just the answer to Mesra45 pondering - The movie wasled led \"FEAR\" AND FOR U DEAR AUTHOR UPDATE THIS MASTERPIECE QUICK!!!!

Amazing story! Hope you update soon and hope this fic continues for many chapters to come... Great work.

jeez, i must say nina\'s the smarter of the two girls.

charlotte\'s so freaking stupid. trying to be brave has absolutely no affect on Matt except it gets her ass kicked. what a dumb bitch. and after every time she gets beat up or raped, she\'s getting brave again only to piss him off even more.

um, excuse me, but could you give her some brains?

Please post more :D