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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nah we're just 3 friends reading the story together...and we all had a very similar reaction. sorry if we all sounded alike, but we were sharing our opinions as the story went on. well stihis his story has turned into a thriller kinda...so yeah keep writing.
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God give this story a happy ending. Look dude if ur writing this story I'm seriously hoping u don't got this bullshit in ur head because if these are the same sick principles u work on then I suggest u go see a psychologist...
Sorry I'm just very very pissed at the character mat right now...feel like i could kill him or something...but anyways...
just give this story a good ending. by good I mean she gets saved by some guy and mat gets thrown in jail.
...gimme a gun and find me 1 of these wife abusers and I could shoot em right now.
Sorry I'm just very very pissed at the character mat right now...feel like i could kill him or something...but anyways...
just give this story a good ending. by good I mean she gets saved by some guy and mat gets thrown in jail.
...gimme a gun and find me 1 of these wife abusers and I could shoot em right now.
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
if the gurl dies i swear 2 god i will come and i shoot u. if she gets pregnant i will come and shoot you.
if anything worse happens 2 her something that normal girls wouldn't do because its against their will i will definatly shoot u.
and trust me dude girls are not as helpless as we appear, so give that some thought 2.
if anything worse happens 2 her something that normal girls wouldn't do because its against their will i will definatly shoot u.
and trust me dude girls are not as helpless as we appear, so give that some thought 2.
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You story has so much potential, Matt is a really strong character. But I sugest that you try to update more often, because the waiting can make the readers bored... But congratutalions, anyway!
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please post more, Im dying to know what happens!
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with the story! I have to know what happeneds!
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, Please
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG This is sooooooooooooo asome I luve it X3 Matt oddly turns me on in so many ways it almost scares me o.O;;; I hope she ends up loving him that would be asome ^-^ good job this is like perfectly twisted and voilent its beautiful *glomps* good job ^.~
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please post more!
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I never thought I\'d have to resort to shameless begging, but you have proved me wrong. Twice a day I look at your author\'s profile for the magical words \"Updated: Very, very recently\" to appear in numeric form. And they don\'t. Sometimes I wonder if I can\'t make them appear with the strength of my wish for them, but that is not working, so I am here and I beg. Please update.