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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, this story made me so horny...if only i had someone to do me right now...but the only ones here are my sis, my dog, my cats, and my friend sam, and i couldn't get ANY of them to do me...not for $1 million!!! if only my dad was still alive to do it...
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey;
I've been a fan of this story, but usually don't like to review. You haven't updated in forever. I love this story, and think it is brilliant. I have some suggestions, since of course, you asked for them. First, do another three year time jump, and have her be sixteen. Second, I would like to see her get a boyfriend, and he could join in on the fun. However, I don't like anything homosexual (not that I'm a homophobe) and seeing your writings I believe you would agree. Therein lies a problem, two girls and five guys. So introduce the boy's mother and sister as two other willing participants. And you know, if you decided to take my ideas to h and and continue this story like we all want you to, you could always name the boy Anthony :-D.
Bye,
Ant
I've been a fan of this story, but usually don't like to review. You haven't updated in forever. I love this story, and think it is brilliant. I have some suggestions, since of course, you asked for them. First, do another three year time jump, and have her be sixteen. Second, I would like to see her get a boyfriend, and he could join in on the fun. However, I don't like anything homosexual (not that I'm a homophobe) and seeing your writings I believe you would agree. Therein lies a problem, two girls and five guys. So introduce the boy's mother and sister as two other willing participants. And you know, if you decided to take my ideas to h and and continue this story like we all want you to, you could always name the boy Anthony :-D.
Bye,
Ant
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn that shit made me hot as hell... i want you to keep this story going... i fingered my self and brought myself to thirteen orgasms while reading this... keep up the good work
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you should get another meachine that fucks her ass and pussy at the same time and put clamps on her nipples a nd clit to make her asch off the bed and make her try and sleep like t Als Also I think you should get her nipples and clit pierced. Great story by the way.
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
god this storie is fuckin awesome!!!11!! try doing like detachable shower heads or food cuz their kool. and ice cubes and stuff. more fisting cuz thats awesome.
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story made me so fucking hot i came all over my chair. I would love to see more bondage and pain in this story. maybe have then use clamps on her nipples and clitty. Toys are always nice too. She and her mother could use a double-sided dildo or her mother could fuck her with a strap on. Maybe making her a prostitute haha. It would be great to see her take two fists in her ass while she had two in her cunt too. Maybe add a little pissing too. Food sex is always hot too. like have her uncle shove a cucumber up her pussy or spread peanut butter in her cunt and have the dog lick it out. ive done that and its like heaven. i just wish my family would fuck me like that. hahah!!
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t care how yontiontinue it, just do!......But I heard a story about like, 3 dogs sending a girl into like, 10 orgasms.
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well you could have her go to a club and get gangbanged . Or have her have a party and there is like 15-20 men ther (including her father,uncles,and grand father) get in a line to fuck her and they all do and she finds this one guy that she has the hots for . and he was that last on to get to fuck her .
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
do you have anymore like this0ne
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, what other animals could you try? i\'m not sure but i really like this fic, update soon!