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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please write more,try to update as soon as possible
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DON\'T STOP THERE! Whenever I see something by you I ALWAYS check it out. You make me soooo damned wet I always read your stuff last ;)
or if you do stop - e-mail me in person with the sequel - I\'ll help proof read, I\'ll help with suggestions, just don\'t stop!
Talking of suggestions, it seems the logical place is to take it out of the classroom, to see the \'real\' ms Brahms. You could always keep it in the classroom to introduce a new character perhaps, but I think theve sve something special going on and that would maybe spoil it.
One last thing - why Ms Brahms? Always reminds me of \'Are you being served?\' TV series! lol!
or if you do stop - e-mail me in person with the sequel - I\'ll help proof read, I\'ll help with suggestions, just don\'t stop!
Talking of suggestions, it seems the logical place is to take it out of the classroom, to see the \'real\' ms Brahms. You could always keep it in the classroom to introduce a new character perhaps, but I think theve sve something special going on and that would maybe spoil it.
One last thing - why Ms Brahms? Always reminds me of \'Are you being served?\' TV series! lol!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of course there should be another chapter! I loved this fic so much! I love that there isn\'t that much characterisation to start with - this could be any student and any hot teacher. But there should definitely be more chapters, more femmeslash, and a bit of relationship progression. This is defn going on my recommended fics - the first original fic to do so.
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please don´t stop there!
Wonderful story!
Thank you!
Wonderful story!
Thank you!
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words, everyone. It\'s nice to see that people like what I\'m doing here; and if I get some ladies wet in the process, I consider that a nice bonus. ;)
I\'m working on the third chapter right now: I can\'t tell you yet what\'s going to happen, but I call yll you it will be... inspiring. :D In the meantime, keep telling me what you think!
I\'m working on the third chapter right now: I can\'t tell you yet what\'s going to happen, but I call yll you it will be... inspiring. :D In the meantime, keep telling me what you think!
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh shit. Now what am i gonna do! Your story is sooo hot! Im soo wet! what am i gonna do at school and see the sexy teacher i have in school. I have to relieve myself now.
I LOVE! Mi!
I LOVE! Mi!
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it hope there\'s more coming soon
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t remember if your main character has a name, but I could freaking kick her for running off when her teacher (can\'t remember how to spell her name, sorry :p) hit on her. Stupid stupid STUPID! I\'d so not run off :p But anyway...I hope she comes to her senses. It\'d be great to see this turn into an actual loving relationship as opposed to just sex, too.
Great chapter! Keep \'em coming :p
Great chapter! Keep \'em coming :p
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, more please! Great sexy chapter although I wish she hadn\'t run away. Eager fo the next chapter. ^^
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
>.< god i hate it when you really start getting into something then... POOF... there isnt anything more.
^.^ its a damn good story, and i cant help but touch myself while reading it.
=P ya so... thats right. your story is makin me really hot. i want more please.
please dont make me beg... ok maybe just a little....
write more plz!!? plz!!? plz!!? plz!!? plz!!?? plz!!????????
^.^ its a damn good story, and i cant help but touch myself while reading it.
=P ya so... thats right. your story is makin me really hot. i want more please.
please dont make me beg... ok maybe just a little....
write more plz!!? plz!!? plz!!? plz!!? plz!!?? plz!!????????