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for Teacher's pet

by Elfy

person your fan
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
seriously...i read alot of fanfiction...and yours are the ones that get me hot...really. continue, \'cause the story is good too!
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just realized I haven\'t reviewed this amazing fic yet! Anyway, I\'m really enjoying it. Lots of smut, atrigtriguing plot, a romantic mood, things that give quality to fics like these. Keep writing, seriously, i wanna see how it ends!
person Fox
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it gets better and better. I kinda feel like Lucy as betrayed Ms Brahms, that she would be upset if she found out about what happened in the principle\'s office. Perhaps SHE was the one that told ms Weisz (sp?) because they themselves have had an affair and Ms Brahms was trying to make the principle jealous?
Just a thought. Now I\'m off to pleasure myself!
person ButterBalls (is always too lazy to log in)
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Fans self* I think I need a cold shower, lol. Just read chapters 5 and 6 and loved every word of them. The sex is *so* unbelievably hot and I like very much how the plot is getting more complicated. Unfortunately I have no idea where I want this to go, so I can\'t offer any suggestions...except that I *do* want this to continue :D
person Wren
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What?! Bad principal! Lol. Plot thickens is right! Am I\'m loving it. Great story, but then you know this.
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NEVER STOP WRITING!!! I\' M SERIOUS HERE. ^_^
person rca
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Hot for teacher! I\'m hot for this story. It\'s about time someone wrote a F/F teacher/student story that was really good! Please keep writing. ^^
person Clayton Overstreet
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liek it! Chapter 5 was good. I hope you\'re not working towards a breakup though> That\'d be sad. *Smirks* Though if yu read my stories in the Tenchi section you may get a neat idea for a yard stick...
person ZealWarrior
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good Elfy; you\'ve got quite the talent for writing, and I don\'t only mean the sexual acts (which are great) but writing as an art form. You have a great understanding of everything from grammer to dialogue; also, your understanding of literature, such as the sonnet and poetic images only adds to the realism of this story, also telling me that you didn\'t throw together something in a minute. Oh, and I liked that comment about Victorian times and the dancing--how true. :)
Anyways, this was very well written; the characters are well done, the sex scenes are classy, and the dialogue is top-notch. Keep up the great work.
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t stop now, it\'s getting really good and it is very nicely written unlike many other stories of this genre