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for Teacher's pet

by Elfy

person Meg
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story-I can\'t wait to see what happens with Carol and Lucy..not to mention the princlipal. What\'s going on with this little love triangle? I need to see what happens between them, and how old is Lucy? Not like it matters, ::wink wink:: Keep up the great writing, I\'ll be waiting for the next installment!
person Ellie
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like this fanfic. its just great thre aren\'t any other words to discrbe it. i wish there more chapters, i wanna find out what happeds. forever me Ellie
person james
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Great Keep Up The Good Work
person cristina
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like this fic. you should put more! lol. What a situation Lucy is in. You can see how Lucy feels about the teacher but is a little confused with it. You got a lot of potential with this story. it is very good. Maybe Carol had to do the same thing as Lucy in order not to get in trouble. Although I actualy would like to see a \"relationship\" form between Lucy and Carol. You can kind of see that through the fic. Maybe after a while Carol some how hurts lucy\'s feelings or something related to that and they cut it off and then Carol realizes she made a mistake? I don\'t know, trying to help an dI am rambling my head off. look, this is a LONG review! lol! Sorry! anyway, look foreword to more!
person S.M.
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait for more,please update as soon as pose S.e
person camaro23
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM


Great, great story, just keeps getting hotter.
person ~*Senshi\'s Tenshi*~
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wooh! Damn! That\'s a ...nice...nifty?...twist! I had a suspicion she knew about the whole principal deal...just wondering if the princiapl got her too... To me, the end was a bit comedic...Orgasm...Eat your luch, you have to be home in 20 minutes... ^_^\'\'

*~Shi-chan~*
person ~*Senshi\'s Tenshi*~
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that\'s great!!!! I usually dont go for orig stuff...but a close friend suggested it...and she\'s right...wow! ^_^!! All but the few typos...and you\'ve got the BEST orig yuri I\'ve read!
person ~*Senshi\'s Tenshi*~
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that\'s great!!!! I usually dont go for orig stuff...but a close friend suggested it...and she\'s right...wow! ^_^!! All but the few typos...and you\'ve got the BEST orig yuri I\'ve read!

*~Shi-chan~*
person your fan
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it\'s very interesting...continue!