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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
still doing great! keep it up!!!!!!
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOT
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Over 10,000 hits. ^_^ Thank you all for reading and reviewing! I\'m working on Chapter nine, but I\'m a bit busy at the moment, so I don\'t know when it will be finished. And thanks for pointing out the Suzy/Lucy thing: that was entirely my mistake, and it\'s been cleared up now. In the meantime, keep telling me what you think!
Love,
Elfy.
Love,
Elfy.
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a really amazing story. It\'s VERY well written; that includes both plot and sex scenes. I also have to say that everything is very nicely described and the dialogue is so real that it just flows and don don\'t actually notice that you\'re reading. But I do have one problem: make the chapters longer so we have more to read! I mean it, I want to read more. And don\'t leave us hanging!
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just realised - at the top of chapter 8 the person\'s name is \'Suze\' or \'Suzy Wilson\' which is in first person. All the rest of the time it\'s Lucy - is there a new character who\'s also banging Ms Brahms? I\'m confused! But very very horny....
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Chanting* Threesome, threesome, threesome!!!!!
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, GREAT work! I hardly ever finish stories I am reading. I tend to lose interest fast, but with your story I was so eager to read was was going to happen next. I love the flow of it, and the way the story is written. You have got to write more, this story, in less expressive words, excites me lol
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe... time to clean my desk chair off... lol. Nice story! :)
By the way... her name\'s Lucy, not Suzy
By the way... her name\'s Lucy, not Suzy
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding! Again...and I sense a love triangle in the air and I like it. The principals lusting after Ms. Brahms, isn\'t she? Cool. Will the pricipal and the teacher now be sharing Suzy? Suzy doesn\'t seem to mind. Anyway, hot story. ^_~
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are the best. By far. I would like to see her fuck Carol again...but I think I can see a \'teachers reunion\' comin on! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!