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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great pleae update soon
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is absolutely great you actaully feel like you\'re right there watching them great job
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! I love this story, There are one or two typos in each chapter though, but it isnt that bad, you can tell what they are meant to say. Hope there will be chapt. 12 and 13 real soon ^^
-- T.Raven/Karasu
-- T.Raven/Karasu
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story was great but it didnt need to be that long, and when the gurls had sex, it would be the same thing over and over.
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, Lucy really likes pink panties, huh? O O O I LOOBE LITTLE BOY UNDIES! theyre so comfy and lucky. yes lucky, and i\'d have it no other way :)
anyway, great story, i love it, its like a LOBE SQUARE! and if there were eight people, it would be A LOBE CUBE!! ^_^ AAND IF IT WERE TEN PEOPLE IT WOULD BE A LOVE SHAPE THAT HAS TEN POINTS ON IT O_O ::resumes breathing::
--Tililia is a mere love dot, and no one loves her -_-
anyway, great story, i love it, its like a LOBE SQUARE! and if there were eight people, it would be A LOBE CUBE!! ^_^ AAND IF IT WERE TEN PEOPLE IT WOULD BE A LOVE SHAPE THAT HAS TEN POINTS ON IT O_O ::resumes breathing::
--Tililia is a mere love dot, and no one loves her -_-
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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This truly is a great story.. its hot, exotic and keeps me coming back for more. I came across this story many months ago and kept going back to see if there were anymore chapters added, but for awhile after waiting for chapters I forgot what the name of the story was and who was writing it so I lost the story but went through hell looking through hundreds of stories just to find this one.. then there it was. its still coming along great. I wouldn't change a thing about it. Keep up the great work and I'll be looking forward to reading more chapters that you post.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice to see u updated!!!! ;) love this story! I think our 2 girls need to do to the older lloves that they did to them! lol, not ot mention that you got me liking the pairintweetween the 2 girls. Still want to b-i-t-c-h slap Carole, lol!!! anyway, keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!! ;):)
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good to see you're writing for this again, I love it! A beautifully written piece of dramatic romance-y erotica... Keep going, yes... Tis a tasty tale.
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first thing that comes to mind is to call that teacher a B-I-T-C-H lol. Our poor girl is heading for a head twist! lol. Just when she was getting bold too. Wicked fic, glad you are updating! ;):)
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story!! Wonderuflly writen, I hope you'll continue writing it!