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for What Makes the World Go Round?

by hikz

person Anon
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah!! To bad you didn\'t though
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im sorry but this is poorly written
person >:)
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now THAT is my kind of world.
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes.
person kelley
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
man that was so hot ... i was touching myslef all through it and i just couldnt wait to take my vibrater and stick it in myslef and turn it on hard... im so wet now and im panting and moaning ... good job...update soon... do you reply to your reviews?
person GD
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
KEEP THE CHAPTERS CUMMING!!!!!!!!
person creamywhiteskin
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice....would like to read about how she payes he other bills....or how she did on the sex finals:)
keep up(and i do mean up) the good work!
person I\'llNeverTell
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good god, that got me wet. I\'ll be looking forward to an update.
person gmhm37
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn you got skills
person No One Knows
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hell ya you should add more! This story is so kick ass!!!! I really wanna see the sex finals!