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by KagetsuAsame

person Jewel
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Kage, I just finished reading your story and so far I like it. But it is a little confusing because you switch from one character to the other and it was hard for me to understand what was going on. But I do like the characters especially Cain and Regi so I do hope you will continue with this story. It would be nice to know more about the two main characters and why is it so easy for one vampire to give another vampire away by just signing a paper? I'm a little confused about how they go about their laws. I do hope you update soon. thank you.
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is chapter 14 supposed to be one line?
ASOTA
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love your story its wonderful and very well written ^_^
I also read that nasty review you had gotten and I know just how you feel *many pple have insulted me the same way* I have to say you took it much much MUCH better then I did lol

love ur story still ^^

~Mizuki-chan
person Sprite
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi I'm really enjoying this story and I'm wondering when you are going to continue it since it has been quite a while since you've updated. Please update as soon as you can.


Thanks,
Sprite
person cricket
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story! i love the charicters too, i have a story i would like you ropinion on it is called frozzen affection my auther name is Cricket with a lower case c. pleas update this is amazing!
person Draculas Daughter
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hay I love you righting! do more .....Please?!
person Girltoy
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you doing very good at this please wright more its very very good!
person Jessi
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have looked through, and read many of the stories you have written. I love them, and think you should continue with them ^_^ & hopefully get to finish them.
happy tales...
~Jessica
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

This isn\'t so much of a review as a please-fix. That being said, I haven\'t read any of your chapters for one reason: The later chapters are messed up, at one point it\'s a paragraph or a sentence per chapter ... Could you fix this? Please? Oh! And I noticed when I looked back at the end of some of the earlier chapters that it would end mid-sentence ... Could you look over them and see if those are supposed to happen or if it\'s another problem to be fixed.

Thanks!
person TyRisha
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m in love with this story... but you haven\'t updated in SOOO long. update! update! i hate Taki though- ironically, he reminds me of another Taki in a certain anime i adore.