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for Riding In Elevators With Girls

by suzie2qute

person Jaquard
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! A bit short and she could have reciprocated a bit, but I guess just her responding should be enough, eh?
person Redhead
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*letting out a shuddering breath* WOW HOT and STEAMING just the way I like it!

Keep the good stuff coming (don't you just LOVE F/F? *nods and sighs with pleasure*)
person Justn
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wrrite more or else i will hunt you down and make you right it lol but forreall i loved it you have skills
person paige
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
smoking hot! now I need to go refresh my panties...^_~
person fenris
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update this because I want to know what happenes next.
person Jl
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is hot ,is thier going to be more?
person Jl
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is hot ,is thier going to be more?
person Yawn the snake
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O Up until the last sentance of the story I thought it was a guy that was finger banging that chick. Well damn....Keep up the good work. Enjoyed reading this.

Yawn the snake
person No One Knows
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to read more, this y isy is awesome!
person Elfy
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very arousing story. Very straightforward, but sometimes the best thing to do is to get straight to the point, and you get to the point very well. ;) Great story, and I\'d like to read more from you.