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for Seeds of the Pomegranate

by LaughingCat

person Asidian
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Promising start and excellent use of descriptive language. The last chapter really made me sit up and take interest- and fear that the Key has no chance of getting out of this with anything worthwhile in tact. ;_;
person Phoenix 3:16
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was incredible. Your story is just gothicly beautiful and frightening at the same time. It leavese the reader wanting more, I certainly do. Please continue.
person Vail
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely one of the good Key stories I\'ve read. Your style is good and the characters are all very believable. Please update soon! ^^
person Jiro
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uber cool. I\'m guessing that the narrator from chapter 2 is going to be unpleasantly surprised later on? This is really interesting concept. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!