rate_review Reviews

I can take the content, it's the paragraphs all running together that makes it so I can't read this story.

I want to know what marcus is going to do and i want to find out what happens to Mary so keep writing. it\'s good.

truly sick stuff, but interesting. I think it would be better if her getaway was confirmed, and he never found her again..and died in a tragic stove accident. The way you ended it made it sound like it was very likely he would find her again. I\'m sure you meant it that way (or could have) but you know me...i hate bad endings. But it really is good the way it is.

anyway, nicely written. Better than that peach crap ;) j/k here, have a cookie *slides you a cookie under the desk*