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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. I was almost crying at the end. It sounds as if the story is from experience, the way you get into her mind - I really hope that\'s not the case. If it is, I hope you find another Carrie. I lost mine...I\'m still looking for another.
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I liked how you finally realized that it wasn\'t your fault. Hope yu find real love some day
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why did Carrie and Lilly breakup?
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hot as hell. more plz, i am soaking wet.
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all. I think you could really do something interesting with this story. Your character Lilly needs some freaking therapy and fast. Maybe you could introduce that and why she\'s acting the way she is? Update soon.