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by DirrtyGrl

person Melrick
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, sick and twisted stories are always great! lol Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it actually

Please update soon!!
person fgd
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lik hell i do, no u stuped a-hole sic bastard
person Sesshomaru\'s Naughty Demon Princess
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!! that was the best!!! It almost had me coming!!!
person Laura
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hm...maybe a little bit too depresing, but still, I must confess to liking it. *sigh* so sue me. Anyway, continue please...it\'s good. In a twisted way :-)
person Shadow Wolf
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an extreemly good fic, please contenue it
person creamywhiteskin
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sick.....but in a good way:-)
more please!
person Horny_little_slut
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice start definetly wanna see more of this
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please!
person anon
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She wants more...give it to her....by her father and his freinds..in every way possible