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for Training

by DirrtyGrl

person Anon
schedule July 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am reviewing to let you know I want more of this sick and twisted story especially the use of instruments and dog.
person The PD
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sick and twisted... *Cheer*
person kay
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue, that made me so fucking wet
person Virpi
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Usually I don't review things like that, but this story captivated me so much that I want you to continue it! Please update!
person brownie77
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great I want more and more
person Anon
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is disgusting it should be removed from the site, the girl you write about is a minor and the subject is foul! There aren\'t words for how disgusting i find this!
person Melissa
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this...very much actually...write more!
person Spaztastic
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good. Rather violent, but nevetheless had a few unexpected twists.
person angel
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah,i want more of this sick,twisted story as u put it lol.call me sick or call me kinky,but this is hot :p
person kat
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so HOT!!!!!!!!!! Write more please........=p