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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh la la! My favorite kind of slash - caring, violent, possessive lover! Oh yeah! Keep the story going or I\'ll have to harass you! ;D
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This is getting better by the chapter! Still, I can\'t figure out Darren. I mean, on one hand, he\'s very practical, avoiding making Mr X upset. Yet, on the other hand, he says things that would certanly make the guy kill him. Hmmm, I find it contradictive. Anyways, Missy is the most sane character XD Or perhaps not, but what is \'sane\'? Update soon, k? I\'m dying to read about what exactly Mr X does to Darren *is a very sick, perverted, but faithful yaoi fan* ^^;;
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(hopping up and down for no apparent reson) Great story! Mr. X is such a great title... (sigh)... I love sadistic, insane, and sexy antagonists. And helpless protagonists are definatly hot too... Yeah... good job so far!
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. It was wonderful. =^^= Sex to tide over is always good and it was written well. I look forward to the next part =^^=
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I sure envy the rate of your updates, as well as the fic itself. I feel sorry for Mr X, he seems so much older, you know, just tired of everything. You write him very well, I can see things through his eyes and justify his treatment of Darren *heavy sigh* The sex part was a bit sudden, although good^^ More soon? Please?
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um, I\'m not sure what to say. This is very different from the fluff I usually read, thus very refreshing. I must say that your style is rather unique, I liked it a lot. And the title \"Mr.X.\" is so creepy, meaning you should definitely stick with it. That\'s how it caught my attention. Well, I won\'t embarrass myself further by a huge review ^^;; Great work so far, please update soon.
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I\'m looking forward to seeing what happens next. Please update again soon, I can\'t wait to read the next installment. =^^=
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good so far! I would love to read more.
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love it! Keep writing, I absolutely have to read more!
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! One word, wow!! Incredible, okay okay so two words, but that is incredible it\'s so twisted and yet powerfull at the same time.