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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee hee, oh my, I\'m loving this! Mr X is cool, in a twisted kind of way. I can\'t decide if I want Darren to stay with him or return home o_O;; Oh well, it wouldn\'t have mattered cause I\'m sure anything you come up with will be great. Please write more^^
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a very good story. You\'ve got me very interested. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. ^_^;;
I like the way you set up the various scenes, and some of the more subtle aspects. Mr. X is an interesting and disturbing character.... good job! :P
I like it a lot!!!
I like the way you set up the various scenes, and some of the more subtle aspects. Mr. X is an interesting and disturbing character.... good job! :P
I like it a lot!!!
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would have logged in for this reviewe, but me being stupid forgot my own password, I spend too much time on fictionpress, and not enough here. Great story, I love the flow, the plot, the yaoi hehehehehe yes me happy. check out my crappy excuse for a story sometime, just chack my name on search.
-Morelwen
-Morelwen
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*claps* very good...........very very good...........i look forward to reading more
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good part, I would really like more =^^= I\'ve really enj it it thus far. Keep up the good work.
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, scary. Tell us what\'s under the bedX3. Poor Darren, I feel for the guy. Well, great chap, update soon!
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...*picks up her jaw* Even without your groove, you write damn well! I don\'t especially like Amanda, sorry, I know she\'s not bad but she seems...errr, in a way, sort Now Now I so want for Darren to return, so you better find your groove and write more! Love the ficce
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good! I barely ever read yaois\' but yours caught my attention. I hope you update soon!
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, I\'m *really* liking this story. Mr. X is a very interesting character! Update soon please!
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ebil kitty? Mrowl. ^.^
Is his name Carlos? -laughs insanely for no reason and passes out-
Is his name Carlos? -laughs insanely for no reason and passes out-