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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am going to add this story to 'Golden Nuggets (OriginalSlash List), posted in Rants/Journals section,
Thank you!
Thank you!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! that was powerful, i never read anything like that before! awesome story i loved it!!!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a good story, I liked it. But you may want to look over it again, there are a lot of spelling mistakes which made some parts kind of hard to make sense of. ^-^ Other than that, it was great. Keep up the good work.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool story, I like it! ^______^
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude... This was really impressive! The plot was good, the characters were touching, and I loved the ending! Can\'t wait to read more of your work.
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, the story was so amazing! I loved how you presented every character, uh, I wasn\'t very fond of Richard though :P Amanda was great! You said you wanted to present her vicioous and barely managed her human; but I think you managed hersonasona wonderfully. *claps* Mr X was just amazing, and IMHO Darren reacted great to everything. I love the way you write, how you expressed everything, makes me wish I had the ability to write in such way, but then again, it gets hard when english isn\'t your first language. :)
If I must say, I wasn\'t very fond of the ending; the last charpter mainly. The basic idea was great, but it seemed a bit rushed to me at the beggining, and it sounded a bit strange, but again, that\'s IMO. The overall of the story is still awesome though *thumbs up* ever thought of publishing it? (as in, profesionally?)
If I must say, I wasn\'t very fond of the ending; the last charpter mainly. The basic idea was great, but it seemed a bit rushed to me at the beggining, and it sounded a bit strange, but again, that\'s IMO. The overall of the story is still awesome though *thumbs up* ever thought of publishing it? (as in, profesionally?)
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your one of my favorite stories! I love how you protray Mr. X\'s acteacter and how Darren slowly becomes much more well..how would you say it..less scared of him but still scared? ^_^;; Okay that may be a bit confussing, but I have never seen anyone show how insane a person can be! Mr. X is one of my favorite stories, just wanted you to know that.
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* oh no! that isn\'t the end is it? PLEASE try and write a sequel, even though that would be really hard......i think. ANYWAYS, i loved it! absolutely LOVED it!
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No, don\'t let Carlos kill him, take out the anger with sex! yeay
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dum dum dumm! did you just say that it was the end? *tears* no! I love Carlos! I want too know what will happen to them, please, write a sequal, for me... I love this story!