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for The Eye of the Beholder

by VampireAldys

schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story. I can't wait to read more.
person Cherrylips
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More. More. More. *poke* Please?
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good start for what looks like will be a really good story. The prologue was done very well and built up a nice bit of interest. The vampire in HS thing could get very good and leaves alot of room for personality conflicts that can make for a great drama to unfold. In short... very nice beginning and I can\'t wait to see how the story unfolds!! Please get to finishing it!

What are you doing still reading this review, get to writing more!

person Iliveinurattic
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, please update soon, pleaaaaaaaase!!!!

this is awesome