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for Communal Shower

by Elfy

person Edith
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was beautiful, really it was.
person Lisa
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, i am so wet now! That was so well written and so HOT! I think i\'ll go masterbate while you write another chapter...*walks off in awe*
person Erin
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ang, ng, simply amazing! u are a fantastic writer, i hope that u continue this wonderful story! Please update soon!
person anon
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more...give us more....pleaseeee...
person Unkown
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg It\'s sooo good! Please continue ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Unlike a lot of the other people around here, I don\'t throw a five star rating around to every story I read, but your writing is excellent. You are a talented writer and your story got me worked up, so keep up the good work. A lot of stories are arousing, but your\'s was arousing AND well written. Good job!
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person hmm
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im not sure about the letter form