rate_review Reviews

Wow, really good story so far. Plots very well drawn out and I like your apin on an old tale. Lol. No joke intended! I definitely think you should continue doing what you\'re doing. ^^

Sorry but after reading \'drowned\' i dont think that my story will ever fit into any competition that you challenge onto the authors. To be honest, after reading drowned, i didn\'t know what to think. As well, this story is based around the girl Tienna and her relationship with the mermaid Aria. I try not to make it smut, like the majority of the stories that ar you your competition. And if she were to steal something from her then it wouldnt be something as simple as a medallion, rather something more complex such as her soul. But that shall be revealed later in the story. Technically this story should be R, but most of mine have been NC17, i honestly dont see any difference between the two. When you say meat you mean sex obviously, of which i have already explained to my readers that there wont be sex straight away. i like to build it up rather than just a one night stand thing. i have reread my story and have difficulty trying to understand where you are coming from. The main character is walking along a walkpath that leads to a beach, she is on a dress contemplating her life and is dressed in a dress as she had just finished work. But thankyou for your review, i appreciate any feedback from my readers.