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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like this. I like checking out other people\'s stories when they review mine, so I thought I\'d hop on over. This could really go a lot of places, not all of them mainstream. *grins* I hope you can just let loose and have fun with this.
The only thing is the formatting. It makes it a little hard to read because there aren\'t new paragraphs every time someone speaks. If you fixed that it\'d be all around great.
I\'m a skateboarding fan, though I suck at it myself, so I thought all of that was cool. Great job, rock on!
The only thing is the formatting. It makes it a little hard to read because there aren\'t new paragraphs every time someone speaks. If you fixed that it\'d be all around great.
I\'m a skateboarding fan, though I suck at it myself, so I thought all of that was cool. Great job, rock on!