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by LucianaMalfoy

person Anon
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i would actually read your story if it wasn\'t for the fact that you don\'t use paragraphs! when people see that they just don\'t want to even attempt readfing it as its too bulky! otherwise the summary sounds great...wonder what the storys like!
person Anon
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a nice fic, but it lacks real fire and hotness