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for When you go down, I go up

by dieingoflife

person Gosh
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man That was good!
person chibi_2
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was good, severely creepy...but good. I liked it bunches.
person Jennay
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea, I know that I didn\'t have to read that, but, wow. That shit is wack. It makes me wonder if YOUR a rapist. I don\'t know, but it seems to me like you\'ve got some issues , you know, to be writing that kind of shit! Oh, and you really suck at writing also. If your going to write a story, don\'t replace periods with ...........<---- that is REALLY annoying!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, I hope you write more soon