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for Kaoru

by hikz

person swiss miss
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so lovingly horny
person heily
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ry rey really good!! another chapter pleace!!!
person notorious
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story! i hope you update the next chapter. i\'m pretty interested to see what will happen next.
person Sarah
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pretty gud... keep up the gud wrk
person Danielle
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the fucking scene. it is so good. i hope u write another chapter.
person rca
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it already. Plots cool and the sex scenes are nicely graphic and sexy as hell. Write more. rca
person zen
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM

The story line was good, but there are some spelling errors. It could have been reviewed. Also some spacing would be helpful.
Other then that nice.
person misterious
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story plez write more really quick!
person No One Knows
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, right more soon