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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! Yes, continue! I can hardly wait for the next chapter, and for what those girls are gonna do next. ^_^
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^.^ GOD!! i love your stories!
>.< you have a very bad habbit of making me super horny.
^.^ not that im really complaining about that.
well anyways..... i gotta head to my bedroom now and releave some tension.as always... write more ^.^
love ya
Amb
>.< you have a very bad habbit of making me super horny.
^.^ not that im really complaining about that.
well anyways..... i gotta head to my bedroom now and releave some tension.as always... write more ^.^
love ya
Amb
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, er... Pretty good ic... Can\'t wait to see how you conclude the cliffhanger. :D ..and... I gotta go now. need to do.. something! ^^;
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, *this* was certainly one of the weirdest fics I\'ve read in some time-- but good weird. Well written, if a little crass, though it fitted in with the general mood of the story so that was no problem. *Very* hot. Very likeable. *claps*
One wee criticism: it wasn\'t paragraphed! Argh...honestly, it\'d be so much easier to read if it was paragraphed.
One wee criticism: it wasn\'t paragraphed! Argh...honestly, it\'d be so much easier to read if it was paragraphed.
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, i was literally rubbing my cunt while i was reading this. A very, VERY awesome job.
Lisa
Lisa
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damnit! Damn, I really need a fucking cold shower now. Hot as hell. Please continue with this sexy assed story.
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more more that is so hot. great idea.
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite simply on a par of excellence. Well written, with only a few things I didn\'t quite think were fantastic- the too fast going through of \'I have a penis!\' when it\'s a bit more likely to be a bit mroe shocking and take at least a few paragraphs to go through it; too too quick \'last orgasm\' bit.
Other than that, all I have to say is \'I wish I had a penis like hers!\' cause, lets face it, who wouldn\'t want a 12 incher that doesn\'t go for one orgasm and then it\'s over.
Four out of five in my book, and I\'d like to see a second chapter of this- or indeed, anything more written by you.
Other than that, all I have to say is \'I wish I had a penis like hers!\' cause, lets face it, who wouldn\'t want a 12 incher that doesn\'t go for one orgasm and then it\'s over.
Four out of five in my book, and I\'d like to see a second chapter of this- or indeed, anything more written by you.
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. You need to write more about it. I have a suggestion. She should do a gay guy, or have a gay guy do her. That would make me very happy. So very very good.
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very erotic. I\'m jealous of the girl! lol It\'s very well written, too. My only criticism would be towards the formatting. I don\'t know if that was deliberate or if that\'s just what happened when you uploaded it, but the formatting needs to be changed, especially the dialogue. But over all, very well done indeed!