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for More than a Woman

by Elfy

person Artie
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
!!!!! ;) Its way cool
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More,More, More!!! this is a lil\' weird, but soo fuckin hot!!! More, and soon, pls!
person Tome
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WTF!!!! FINISH IT FINISH IT. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!. Ok fit of rage over. I would defonutly wanna c more of this. It is grate in graphic detail. Plz finish it
person Tome
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WTF!!!! FINISH IT FINISH IT. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!. Ok fit of rage over. I would defonutly wanna c more of this. It is grate in graphic detail. Plz finish it
person dokushoka
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is definitely a great story. i hope you continue writing more for this story. i think this has got to be the most unique story i\'ve read so far. great writing!
person Fox
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God DAMN you woman! this is one weird, yet very erotic story. OF COURSE WE WANT MORE! Write it already!
person thinking
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was soo hot! You know I had the exact same dream that I had a penis and I was walking around the girls toilets and showers. Weird huh? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! Great discriptions really well done! ;)
person dd
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
definate
person rca
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Hot. And I thought the first chapter was praise worthy...damn! You sure do have a way with visual descriptions. Shoot, I am in need of a change of clothing after reading this chapter. Keep up the great work. ^_~
person Izzy
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story\'s been... amusing. I wouldn\'t mind if you continued it.