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for More than a Woman

by Elfy

person Anon
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINISH IT! FINISH PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
person Cookie
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! mighty fic *bwahahaha* comeooooon start writing! I'd love to read what she's going to do to all those wet pussies *hehe*
person Redhead
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG very interesting fic *panting heavyly* PLZ, PLZ, PLZ continue I WANT MORE MUCH MORE!

UPDATE SOON.. COMEON!!!!
person ToyBoy
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!! FUCK THOSE HORNY BITCHES GOOD!! STRETCH those PUSSIES and SPUNK them GOOD FILL THEM UP TO THE RIM!!! *shudders with pleasure*

PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEE CONTINUE I"LL BE WAITING WITH MY HAND IN MY BOXER!
person AntTheGenius
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One of these days . . .

You'll write more and we'll all love you again. Great Work!
person deathsythe
schedule August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
come on you can\'t just stop there if you have any shred of respect go on
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please more chapters of this.pleasssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeee
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You can\'t leave us hanging in the second chapter like that...so give us some more, eh? Though I do agree with the \'who\'s who\' criticism...but that\'s a minor point.

Give us more, and I shall review more!
person youkai
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice idea.. *thehehe* but in the second chap. i can hardly remember, who looks how... perhaps you should wait a little until you introduce new charascters and describe the clthes of the others a little more detailed ^^;
sorry for thbut but beside that nothing distrubes me :P
go on like that ^___^
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:Screams and pulls out hair: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Cliffhangers are cruel plot devices and must be stopped. More please before I wet myself. LMAO.