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for More than a Woman

by Elfy

person Ashleigh
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! I am so turned on by this story! I read the first chapter a long time ago and had one of the hardest orgasms ever without touching myself, but rode the chair into abandon! Please continue. I just can\'t take it. Right now I need to go take care of something... ^_^
person Snidne
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like with any good story, it\'s important to finish what you start! After all, you wouldn\'t want to disappoint the faithful readers, now would you?
person Doreen
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue!
person gigi
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll keep reviewing if you keep adding chapters, how about that?
person Dragon, The
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, awesome story. And your writing style is awesome, if you ever do finish the party scene (and you should!) I know that none of the characters will get ignored even in such a complicated scene.
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think i dated this chick in real life.... XP
person Captain Cock
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please!
person Ubermuffin
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More would be good.
Your writing style is uniqe compared to other on the site, and I\'d like to see more, epecially of this story.
Keept up the good work.
person dario
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh god! i got hard from reading that! i really hope you update soon!!
person Mistress
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let's see... criticism first. I personally, am a perv, therefore I'd like to see a scene of her 'exploring' her new appendage. Mostly because, let's face it, if all us women suddenly woke up with a penis, the first thing we'd do (after calming down, of course) would be wank.

Second, I agree that some parts sound a little rushed.

But (here's the praise), I rather enjoyed it. Nothing like this to break the monotony at work, let me tell you. *So* glad the office is occupied by just me today. ^_^