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for More than a Woman

by Elfy

person Carnive
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love it if you continued.
person FlusterBunny
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quite an amusing story. This tale would be vastly improved if you could just tweek the formatting. As it is now, it's very hard to read. You should skip a line between paragraphs, your readers (me in particular, I confess) will be ever-so-grateful.
person Qwern
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! It's very rare that you find a futanari fic on this site, especially one of this quality with numerous chapters. You might want to think about adding another dickgirl or giving one of the girls anal. Keep on writing!
person Dragon, The
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Another great chapter, but oh so sneaky of you to leave us another cliff-hanger :'(. I hope you update soon!
person known as the unknown
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
jesus this is hot. please continue
person Takara
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, that was totally hot!!! but the next chapter better be hotter than that.
person blondiexoxo
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In a wierd way this is hott hope u update soon
person Jaded
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, first off, you are insanely cruel. lol, I did not see that cliff hanger coming and I have never been so dissappointed to see one in any story. Wow, continue continue continue!
person Morb
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Girl, I\'ll kick your ass if you stop now.
xD
That was so hot.
Please, keep going!
^_^
person Me
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definatly carry on.