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for In this Bitter Heart

by Dismald

person Ramsey
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the mingling of sex and pain is somethin that is really hard to do, whether in real life or on paper but youve done it very well here. the dispair in the sex....its beautiful.
talk to me some more.
person Kanzen ne tsuki
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When the soul rages and the heart cries, and we feel we are alone and godless,
that is when we must reach out and try and find the life boat god has sent to
save us.
You write so beautifully, my dearest one. You shock me more every time I look at
one of these. Do not be caught and swallowed by the raging whirlwind of your own pain.
Remember, there is always a way out, even if it is only the trembling hand of a friend
that is offered to you that can pull you free.
Tsuki-san