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Hey your fic was great and I was disappointed to see the last chapter was 20 please write more

The human kind. I’ll bring him up soon so you can see.” I said, brushing a hand through his hair.

“Can I eat him?”




I found that cute for some odd reason. Lol. I wanted to review before I completely finished reading this. I love your characters. I like the way your put their individual thoughts and perspectives in the alternating chapters. It\'s cool. It helps me get to know the characters better, than opposed to third person. Well, I\'ll review again after I get through a few more chapters. But I like it alot so far.

Seiyoku Koi? Koi as in koibito? Like \"lover\" in Japanese? -=Looks curious=-

Oh yay! I LIKE Nai and Kokkaku. It\'s a good idea, a very good idea. Yay. How do you keep trac all all your characters? There are so many of them. Makes MY head spin to remember them all, let alone thier personalities.

Did this make any sense? I highly doubt it. It\'s almost midnight, and I\'ve had about 2 hours of sleep in the past two days. Ok, I\'m rambling. Sorry.

^^ I\'m lovin this story, sept I\'m not done, oh well

I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!

I love the characters and the total hotties they would be! Both the male and female ones! Please, please, update. I want more!

Wow... Here\'s another review for you. This is wonderful work. ^_^ Can\'t wait to read more.

Blah! so few people review on this site. Any who...This is a great story thus far! And I have a suggestion for the Doc\'s name. How about Juskuro?