rate_review Reviews

i love the characters in this story

i read it again and ive finally understood it (this is what i get for reading it so late lol) cool story carry it on

i like the way that youve written the story but its a bit confusing when you get to the end of a chapter the next one doesnt seem to connect on

and that would be tsubasa. how appropriate.

except that he doesn\'t want to come back. heheh. he has Seiyoku now.

i\'m loving this story. even as short as the chapter was, i\'m already stuck on it.

Man, it\'s been what? A year or so now since the last time I checked up on this story and there\'s still only 20 chapters. You can\'t end it like this! I still what more even if no one else does! Of course, I now see you also have quite a few stories that you\'re working on now, but still! Until you write more I suppose I could occupy myself with some of your other stories, but if a year goes by and you don\'t have anything new... I\'ll... well... BAH! There\'s nothing I can do, but hope you continue.

~You devouted and patient fan,

Zoe Tellerman

Mrew. >,< How do I always end up reading this story at midnight? Kindeepyeepy....Erm, right. Anyhow. It was good, I liked hearing about Jin, hopefully more of that in the future? >.> And no more making Kokakku feel bad! I\'ll be angry and cry like a little kid. XD Just joking, but still... Anywayz, can\'t wait for the next chapter, really. How long do you plan on making this?

~Your now devoted fan, Nightmare~ XP It\'s to late to be writing reviews!

>,< That made me want to cry for Kokakku. Gr. -=Kicks you=- Meanie, making Kokakku sad like that. You should be ashamed.

Hm. I\'m only on chapter 13. But I hope you make Nai and Kokkaku happy....