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for The Dangerous Lives of Renter Boys

by Murron

person Anon
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who are you kidding with this crap about not having a plot?! :D You\'ve got a very nice plot warming up, and it feels like you\'re really starting to enjoy your characters (as am I), which for someone who writes as well as you do, inevitably leads to a plot. ;) I just hope someday it leads to a conclusion, but if that\'s not for awhile, I\'ll be happy as long as you update every few weeks or less.
person meg
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww!! This story is great too! I wanna know waht happens next.. please please update! You really have awesome stories!!! I think I\'ll read some more!! lols.
person buenagirl
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very excellent fic. Well written and so captivating. I hope that you continue it sometime. I can\'t wait to see how the world turns for these boys... ^_^
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Most excellent. Thought for sure it would be sappy. But it was actually nice.
person fairyflame
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like! Write another chapter... NOW!! Good job and keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love how your story is comming along, and I await more. You have an intoresting plot line going on, but I hope there is somewhat of a good ending.
person Megami_Layla
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasp!* ... *faints*..*wakes up* NOO!! where are the other chapters!!!!?!
person Nina
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story \"Rent Boiit wit was superbly brilliant! You are amazing at creating likeable characters, with interesting personalities. There aren\'t that many fan-fic writer that are able to nail that.

Good job,

Nina
person Lith
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Only five chapters? I am sad! ;_; I could read a hundred more adventures of these boys! ^_^ There\'s nothing I can find to improve your writing. Your characters are wonderful, your detail is great and you can even write the slang of the period, of course I am envious. You certainly know you stuff! I hope you continue this series with more and more chapters. I\'ll be back for every one! (And don\'t be afraid of writing more smut. That\'s why I read these things. LOL. You write it well!)
person Artie
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! You\'re a wonderful writer! I hope that there\'s more soon!