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by Dismald

person jenny
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahem. Nice song you copied there.
person Kanzen Ne Tsuki
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I see the girl in the mirror with the bloody eyes, and the dead heart. She has cried herself dry, and has nowhere to go but down. There is a lot of pain in this poem. Your heart is bloody... why is the reflection in the mirror a whore? Self depreciation is self defeating. The pain is excruiating... I can feel it over 5,000 miles away.
Tsuki-san