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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Drools* Vikings good! Love the way this plot goes, it\'s brilliant and sexy. I\'ll make sure to review for now on and stop being so damn lazy.
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t fret, I love this story and from your many hts. so do a lot of readers. It\'s a highly enjoyable and stranglely ading ing story. Give yourself a pat on the back. ^_^
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. It is one of my most favorite on this site. I can really picture what life was life for the viking from your story.
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great keep it up. i hope the couples can be happy they are so cute :)
ps; kill that dam Maclean laird
ps; kill that dam Maclean laird
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh...facinating ending. Lmao! Lucky brother indeed, and lucky little brother; I like how he just walked in, not caring and all that other good stuff. I liked that a lot. Keep it up, this fic is really good just like the first!
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the best stories on AFF!
Your writing is truly beautiful... such style.. I love the POV descriptions..
they add so much more depth.. color.. flavor to the story.
I read AND enjoyed VSI, but you seem to have grown as a writer.. more confidence perhaps..
and this story is showing so much more of the characters and there interactions and reactions.
Well done.. and beautifully written!
Your writing is truly beautiful... such style.. I love the POV descriptions..
they add so much more depth.. color.. flavor to the story.
I read AND enjoyed VSI, but you seem to have grown as a writer.. more confidence perhaps..
and this story is showing so much more of the characters and there interactions and reactions.
Well done.. and beautifully written!
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs with a big smile on face* You need to write more chapters like one and two... those are my favorites. Of course, the battle between Leif and that girl (the fight and thoughts of her running past him)--of course that fight is great...but rereading chapters 1 and 2 are like...faries flying around in my head...it makes me happy. ^_^ I\'m thinking of rereading The Viking Saga I, but sorta\' afraid....I may not like it as much as chs 1&2 of II.. o.o;;; Anywho...keep of the good work and don\'t keep us waiting for more chapters! >^-^<
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the stories! Far, far better than a romance novel. Well written. I sincerely have no criticism for you.
Well, a thought, maybe, but not criticism:
what would happen if one of these vikings was caught by the burly, muscular fathers of one of these girlies?
Well, a thought, maybe, but not criticism:
what would happen if one of these vikings was caught by the burly, muscular fathers of one of these girlies?
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hm...it\'s getting even better. I like it. Yes, you\'ve been slacking off on this but it\'s not as bad as I have been with my fics. Dear god, it\'s been months since I put out another chapter for something on fanfiction.net.