The diamond (?)'s are very distracing while trying to read the content of the story + the mis-spellings, jumbled up sets of words are even more disrupting my reading enjoyment. Doesn't your word processer have an auto spell checker? The ending really left me high, dry & disappointed. I hope you are able to find the new or continuing thread in your mind. Good luck!
Mary Jean,
Sorry, I forgot to add plot suggestions in my previous post.
The camp counselors could have more one sex + dual sex + rotating partners directed / structured hands-on sex oriented activities : like kissing; blindfolded touching of partners with required discriptive reactions; co-cabin interaction activities with rotating partner activities, nude small group physically active games like keep away or team games? Learning oposite sex masterbation techniques with the co-cabins. Nude mixed swimming.with partners that require cooperation to win? There are any number of gradually more sexually intimate activities, building to full instructed intercourse = pairs, co-cabins & full camp.
I think these plot suggestions are obvious, but the building of the story tension will be the crux of the story success?
Good Effort?
pwagro
like u said, u write baout them seen each other again and you could write that something happens...that she is suppossed to give him a blow job or something!!!! or that he trieswithwith her!!!!
i know you can do it!!!!