rate_review Reviews

you sent out a good message with this story. hee hee i didn\'t know what PWP stood for but i read it anyway ^^ and i\'m glad i did because as angsty as it was it was a good read. great job!

It\'s a good story in essence but I feel you need to expand upon what you\'ve got because it started and ending too abruptly. I mean, what\'s going tppenppen to their relationship? Will they go back to being best friends and pretend nothing has happened?
To me, it felt like the story had no real beginning or end and it just comprised of a middle. I think you need to give more details. Yeah, I\'m aware it\'s PWP but a bit more background on the characters would have been nice- like why they decided to have sex, what their relationship was like before even if it had only been a small bit like \"she remembered when...\"
Yove ave a great start to a story, and I hope that you expand upon it.
Ki

You see, I would go deeper maybe, make something out of this PWP -but I don\'t want to butcher what I came up with. I mean, if you look at \"I\'ve had enough of sex\" and the dead sequel I tried to make out of that (not to mention the pathetic chapter 5 that was actually in that story) you\'ll get what I\'m afraid of. Less is less, I guess, but it\'s all I\'m giving. Thanks for reviewing.

A one night stand with a friend? Some of us have been there! Great way to show the angst. Good job.