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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOoo....cliffhanger (not really...but I was ready for some luving)!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ms. Scribe,
I have to say Wow! to your first chapter. Cool. Unconventional protagonist ( ;) ). Humour.
And on top of that, very well written.
Cool first chapter.
\"Please zip him into his sleeping bag, so he doesn\'t wander around in the dark.\" and very good finish...
And I really liked the fact that any other people in the world feel like this... Just like me \"Look, I don\'t like the taste. It\'s a waste of perfectly good grapes. No, I\'m not a prohibitionist. I\'ll suck down a vodka Collins in a minute, but I have to have the alcohol disguised. Otherwise, ech.\"
Second chapter is cute. :) As is Lawrence. Three too. :) And seven...
As we\'d say in Sweden, yee-haw, you can write, girl. :)
Plot development, etc. good, interesting. Keeping the reader interested and hooked. Writing style is good.
I have to say Wow! to your first chapter. Cool. Unconventional protagonist ( ;) ). Humour.
And on top of that, very well written.
Cool first chapter.
\"Please zip him into his sleeping bag, so he doesn\'t wander around in the dark.\" and very good finish...
And I really liked the fact that any other people in the world feel like this... Just like me \"Look, I don\'t like the taste. It\'s a waste of perfectly good grapes. No, I\'m not a prohibitionist. I\'ll suck down a vodka Collins in a minute, but I have to have the alcohol disguised. Otherwise, ech.\"
Second chapter is cute. :) As is Lawrence. Three too. :) And seven...
As we\'d say in Sweden, yee-haw, you can write, girl. :)
Plot development, etc. good, interesting. Keeping the reader interested and hooked. Writing style is good.
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I almost thought you'd never update this story! But wow, it was worth the wait...another great chapter. Lawrence is very sweet to wait for the perfect moment. I can't wait until they finally do it lol
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, please continue. The whole story is original, realistic, and funny. I love the interactions between the characters.
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really really really really liked this! I\'m not sure how old it is, or when it was last updated, but I LIKE it a bunch! I so hope that this continues, and that I can experience more of your wit and humor that is a lot like my own. That\'s actually what drew me into the fic, the fact that all the humor and jokes were things I would have said if I were in that same position. ^_^ I really want to see more of this, it\'d be dreadful if there was no more to come!
A Fan of Laughter,
DarkwolfyOne
A Fan of Laughter,
DarkwolfyOne
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first chapter of this and I am really enjoying it. I see that you have not updated recently. Hope you will get back to it before I finish what you have. I just head good works that die in the WIP graveyard. It is really refreshing to read something that is not about high school kids.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Were you planning on continuing this? Because it\'s really good, and I really enjoyed it.
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooo! No kidding! I\'ve always said your original stuff kicks ass and this fws sws suit! (With a cat coverup!) Loving this! Can\'t wait to see Lawrence pinned to the ground and debauched (cause Lawdy don\'t he need it!) Brill, as always!
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story,I hope you\'ll update soon.