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by Scribe

schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so cute! I love it! I love how she and Lawrence interact. It's the cutest thing ever!!! Please continue!
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I visited your website and this is listed as "in progress". If you have the time, please update, because I love your characters and cannot wait to see the development of Scribe & Laurie's relationship! Kudos! :)
person Kiku/Auni
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
To check the Review Alert thingy....AND please update this :D
person Paranoia
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your work. I love this story. I hate your slow updates. Please continue and finish it.
person Monkey Lady
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if it's finished, probably not, but what a lovely piece! I adore it, really! Your characters are wonderful and fun and the story progression is great. I really hope this isn't the end. I've bookmarked it and I'll be back for more. Thank you for writing this for us to enjoy!
person sunny
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^I loved this story!is it just gonna end thre tho?
person trateo
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re going to give me a younger man fetish, you, lol. Between this and the CSI greg sanders fic I read, your stories have kept me up two night running! Thank you so much for these fics - they\'ve really been helping me get through some not-so-nice days. And making me develop a bit of a blond fetish ^_^
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was probably the best story I\'ve read in these pages. Well done.
person fmuder
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! That was short...but sweet :) Now time to update your other stories (Roman Enlightenment *wink wink*)
person kiiru
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update! She didn\'t sleep with him yet... Wow. Thats true determination. : ).