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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. That was very interesting. Very original. I liked it. =3
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey. nice job. very sensual. made me turned on! i like how you describe it slowly and step by step not missing anyting out!
very interesting!!!!
very interesting!!!!
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not too shabby.
Good imagery, and you got right to the point.
Seemed kinda short, though. Maybe being a bit more descriptive would help. Also, it may have been written in a fit of horniness, but some proofreading afterwards wouldn\'t hurt.
I look forward to reading future stuff.
Good imagery, and you got right to the point.
Seemed kinda short, though. Maybe being a bit more descriptive would help. Also, it may have been written in a fit of horniness, but some proofreading afterwards wouldn\'t hurt.
I look forward to reading future stuff.