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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was creepy yet erotic.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
to me that was really powerful and now i'm going to go check out other works from you.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poetic. One word.
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O;;; ...
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, i do view that as rape and to many, including me, that is a very touchy subject. So many people face rape, as weither plain touching, forceing to do things, or loosing virginity. If u had a sense you would stop to think of all those men and wemon that are raped everyday before u write things like that. But thats just my opinion.
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok that\'s creepy
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How evil.
And yet, so very well done.
And yet, so very well done.
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kewl
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nape ape b/c she is all wet so she must be enjoying it a lot. just very rough sex or a rape game
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was...interesting. kinda scary though. I never thought that you could put so much...eroticness in like, one paragraph! If you put this idea with some characters and a plot, you\'ll have a good idea! And yes, I am an author! I have an original stroy too! Keep trying! ~Yamistar