AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Then and Now

by Ramsey

person ree
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that may have been short but it sure as hell was arousing!
person Yamistar
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As I said before, very erotic! I still say you should put somemore...unff into it. Like characters or a plot, setting! Ignore the two stars because they don\'t mean anything! I look at my reviews and that\'s it really! I will look at the stars for my stories, but they don\'t mean anything. Just an oppinion. Try my addvice on the story. It might help! ~Yamistar