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for I Can!

by Ramsey

person ree
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa!!! that was intense...meaning that it was really good.
person ennsaiyn
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
COOL AS SHIT!! I LIKE THIS IT\'S OUT THERE AND SO TRUTHFULL
person Moeko
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When I read I have this really bad habit of reading out loud when I really get into what I\'m reading. Imagine my horror when I actually came to to feel the hairs in the back of my neck and arms stand on end and looked around to face the stares of a few of my roomie\'s \'decent friends\'. The computer is in the livingroom so I couldn\'t really have my privacy at the moment. I was embarassed and blushed bright red but I glared at them. If they don\'t like what I read they can go whtheythey came from. It \'is\' my house. Sorry for dumping this on you but I can\'t really vent on anyone else at the moment.

Anyway, sorry again.

The poem is really good. I try to think up words to give me a boost when down and i think I\'m goin use use your poem. ^_^

Good job.